It tastes like water from the river.
It smells like nothing but a dolphin in the sea.
Rain sparkles in the dark clouds.
It feels like an invisible speck in my dream.
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Hi Jenna that sounds so sweet and lovely. The part when you mentioned "IT FEELS LIKE AN INVISABLE SPEAK IN YOUR DREAM" Well when I read that poem I could make a full movie in my head but the movie was perfectly perfact. So I'd say the poem is 100/100. Well Done Jenna. From Izobella.
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